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Hey. I wrote this poem today, I had a sick day from school so this is the result. I would love any feedback you have for me, it would be much appreciated, like a message or a rating. We're doing a poetry section in school and any input would help me ou
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Created by BurningYourLies on Friday, November 30, 2007

Run
My feet are rounding,
My head pounding
I'm short of breath,
In the back of my throat, the taste of death

I don't look back
Must keep these dark eyes on track
Almost there, I feel it now
Just a little more, but how?

I stumble, I fall
Lay on the ground, just don't move at all
Feel the pouring rain
Mix with the tears from my eyes I can't contain

They gather around
As I lie in a mound
Shaking their heads
More disappointment threads
How sad, they say
How pathetic...

I turn away painfully
Though, judging my movements carefully
They spring at my back
That's all that was needed, one last attack

Dark eyes now fade to gray
Never again to see the light of another day
Tears no longer fall
Just the rain, it's silence and all

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